Rewriting both my framing doc and the book. It was inevitable that the feedback would go this way. It’s also amusing that my supervisor is able to read what I write and bridge the difference between a non academic bastard as myself, then provide a paint by numbers explanation. That’s all I need. All anyone who can’t understand a rigid system needs. I admire his patience and kindness. I hate to admit it but I like the challenge of writing in this other way which is unlike the way I naturally write. Obviously, same reason I try writing melodic classical piano. Can I sustain that which is interesting and rely not on my habits? This must be why Stanley Kubrick went from 2001 to Barry Lyndon to Eyes Wide Shut.